The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which e result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy consumed in an Australian household on average and the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions produced by these households due to energy use.
It is noticeable that heating was the biggest consumer of energy in an Australian residence and that water heating produced the most greenhouse gas emissions.
As shown in the first pie chart, heating consumed the highest percentage of energy, constituting 42%, followed by water heating at 30%, which was the second largest consumer. In contrast, cooling consumed the least amount of energy, with only 2%. As for the remainder, refrigeration and lighting used almost the same amount of energy as other appliances, at 11% and 15%, respectively.
The second pie chart shows that water heating was the largest producer of greenhouse gas emissions, accounting for 32%, which was slightly more than the emissions produced by other appliances (at 28%). Cooling was still the smallest contributor, with its emissions comprising only 3%. Similar amounts of greenhouse gas were emitted by heating and refrigeration, at 15% and 14%, respectively, while lighting produced approximately half that amount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, still, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5027027027 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99482875463 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3842965683 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249449881633 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111640192217 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10596231423 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182670287918 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102525940225 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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