The diagrams explain the ways and devices in which the two types of materials are manufactured for the purpose of construction

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The diagrams explain the ways and devices in which the two types of materials are manufactured for the purpose of construction.

The diagrams illustrate the processes and devices used to manufacture two types of materials commonly employed in construction: concrete and steel.

For concrete production, the process begins with the mixing of raw materials such as cement, sand, gravel, and water. these ingredients are combined in a concrete mixer, where they are blended into a uniform mixture. The mixture is then poured into molds to form the desired shape, where it hardens over time through a chemical reaction known as hydration. The hardened concrete is then ready for use in construction projects.

steel, on the other hand, is manufactured through a more complex procedure. First, iron ore is extracted and melted in a blast furnace. The molten iron is then processed in a converter to remove impurities and is mixed with carbon to form steel. After cooling, the steel is shaped into different forms, such as beams or rods, through processes like rolling or extrusion. these materials are then ready for use in various construction applications, providing strength and durability.

In conclusion, both materials undergo distinct yet essential processes involving specific devices to ensure their suitability for construction purposes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...uch as cement, sand, gravel, and water. these ingredients are combined in a concrete ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Steel
...dy for use in construction projects. steel, on the other hand, is manufactured thr...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...gh processes like rolling or extrusion. these materials are then ready for use in var...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51595744681 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92490805727 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9437489165 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208479939155 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078888450091 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931767220917 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156617255702 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921672860587 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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