Today, there are many problems that countries have to face and some people think that relationships are the best way to solve. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In today’s world, nations are facing various problems ranging from climate change, global warming and pollution. While some argue that international cooperation is the most crucial. I believe that although it is important, other aspects such as education and infrastructure development are equally essential.
There are several causes to the rise in problems including noise and water pollution, traffic jams. From one standpoint, these are problems that almost all countries are dealing with. Strengthening the relationship between countries should help to solve this important problems, the authorities should introduce stricter regulations, mitigate waste products in environment, economic growth, the trade marking, they also help sharing fuel or renewable energy to less wealthy nations.
In addition to the major changes that interest relationships, there are other crucial areas that countries should invest in, such as education, healthcare and transport infrastructure. To begin with, I believe that educating public, especially children, about environment and how to preserve it can significantly reduce waste and improve the quality of life, including air quality. As a result, governments may have input to develop healthcare system, including advanced medical equipment or caring robots. For example, Nordic nations, are not wealthy nations but they are always high rank top on both physical and mental health. Secondly, transportation systems also require strict rules to reduce traffic accidents and traffic jams, which often contribute to poor air quality and stress. At point for this case is car-free day, people just walking or cycle driving instead, which promotes an egalitarian and sustainability society.
In conclusion, despite the long-term of cooperation countries, they could help to develop nations. However, other factors such as education, healthcare and environment are still more important and the key to address the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...tional cooperation is the most crucial. I believe that although it is important, ...
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Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to share' or 'share'.
Suggestion: to share; share
...owth, the trade marking, they also help sharing fuel or renewable energy to less wealth...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ransport infrastructure. To begin with, I believe that educating public, especial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85017421603 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97254409639 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665505226481 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9449437813 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961796908548 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299425757887 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327976498565 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554822675423 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409535251347 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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