Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
My father once told me a story about termites. He said they are hardworking insects. During the rainy season, they gather up foodstuffs and store them against dry season or period of famine. This story is a lesson for everyone. Personally speaking, it is better to save your money for sometime in the future than to enjoy it when you earn it.
For example, Mary was affected by the economic meltdown that affected most companies in Nigeria in 2011. She was relieved of her duty during the month of June, 2011 and she fell sick shortly after that. The doctors where struggling to save her life and ...
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