These days there is an ongoing debate among people about zoos and if it should be viewed as a positive or negative impact on the animals. While it is possible to claim that animals in zoos do not have freedom and they suffer psychologically, my view is that advantages outweigh the disadvantages of the zoo. Both sides of the arguments will be discussed and my view presented in this essay.
Apparently, there are various advantages of keeping animals in the zoo. One of them is that animals get proper diet and medical aid while they are looked after by the skilled workers. It cannot be argued on how zoo provides a safe environment for endangered species. It should also be taken into account that people get to learn about different species of animal in a zoo visit. Additionally, in the era of urbanization, animals in their natural habitat are suffering while those kept in zoos are properly looked after.
Those who argue against the concept of the zoo have a different view and say it can harm animals. Firstly, it is claimed that the animal right is compromised while keeping them in an enclosed area. Then, there are concerns about psychological stress they go through when they see humans around.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the cases, my opinion is that zoos do not hurt animals instead help them. I strongly recommend that zoos should not be banned exposing those animals to the unseen vulnerability of the world where everyday wildlife is getting impacted. More animals should be kept in a zoo and taken care of. The increment in the zoo area might be of tremendous help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76512455516 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61886408731 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5190824589 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324133162137 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119047598178 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631026837786 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203449554598 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723128927891 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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