Climate change is a big environment problem that has become a critical in last couple of decades. Some poeple claim that people should stp burning fussil fuels and use only alternative resources, such as solar wind powrer. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industry, and not using them will lead to economy collapse.
In last couple of decades, many hold that presuming on fossil fuels regarding oil, coal and gas is the pivotal contributor to climate change and must be switched to only use renewable energy such as wind and solar power, whereas others adopt a view that using solely alternative resource is the main culprit for thriving economies in many countries. I would assume that while the latter opinion seems plausible to some because of their financial promise, the former is justifiable for its influence on all lives of humanity.
First and foremost, while global warming is caused by natural disasters in terms of storm, typhoon and earthquake,..ect, it is largely shaped by human activities rather than the natural itself. In fact, the overuse of fossil fuels depletion regarding oil, coal and gas; the exhaust fumes of vehicles; the gas emission from plants are the main culprit for leaving carbon footprint into the air excessively. As the result, greenhouse effect is exist and in turn, is one of the leading causes of global warming.
Obviously, the use of non- renewable energy has the harmful impacts on various habitats and jeopardize human lives. For instance, coal-fired power plants are the single largest source of emissions. It releases millions tones of emissions into the air, disposes its product wastes into both the nearby water and ground, thus wiping out species inhabit the area regarding fish, passing through the food chain.
The overuse of fossil fuels not only creates real risks for our biodiversity but for human beings. As many studies have found, the exhausted emissions can lead to neurological and neuro- behavioural effects in embryos and young children. Presuming on fossil fuels could paints a disastrous picture of infertile land, polluted air and water.
Suppose that human beings find out the live-supportive artificial environment to deal with the loss of natural habitats, lives of our biodiversity and humanity are still be demised. The extinction of one species could leads to the death of the others. In a forest reside vegetation, takes rabbits and wolves for example. When the emissions from the plants destroy all vegetation, rabbits lost their food and thus will starve and die out. The extinction of wolves will therefore be an obvious outcome. This show the world that might happen if fossil fuels is overused and safer alternatives to fossil fuels in terms of solar and wind power are not be developed.
However favorable for environments, danger-free such as wind and solar power still have some disadvantages. First unsuprisingly, the technologies that utilize danger-free energy as solar and wind power remain relatively expensive. Therefore, a large segment of industry demand heavily on cheap energy, which is fossil fuels, in order to be able to keep up with the fierce global competition. One of the unfortunate disadvantages of renewable energy is that its issues with the stability of the system. Alternative resources is highly seasonable and therefore unable to produce enough energy to meet the demand.
Despite all the potential risks, I contend that the advantages of renewable energy will be far more significant and some feasible solutions can be considered to address these disadvantages. First, solar and wind power are not the only alternative resources. Compare to solar power and wind farms, geothermal power is one of the cheapest renewable energy. Moreover, this energy extracted from the earth’s core and will remain as long as the earth exists, which means it is not dependent on wind or sun, and available all the time. Second, governments should open some organization funds alternative resources projects for charities, crowd funded by the community to either manufacturing solar and wind power plants or raising people attention for environments.
In conclusion, using alternative resources to replace fossil fuels must be prioritized because non- renewable resources could wipe out all habitats and species. By considering all the pros and cons, I wholeheartedly believe that multilateral efforts must be made to hasten our process of saving our home from global warming
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
In last couple of decades, many hold that presuming on fossil fuels regardin...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...n terms of storm, typhoon and earthquake,..ect, it is largely shaped by human acti...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... terms of storm, typhoon and earthquake,..ect, it is largely shaped by human activ...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...ly. As the result, greenhouse effect is exist and in turn, is one of the leading caus...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'paint'
Suggestion: paint
...ildren. Presuming on fossil fuels could paints a disastrous picture of infertile land,...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ed. The extinction of one species could leads to the death of the others. In a forest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 10.4138276553 307% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3498.0 1615.20841683 217% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 663.0 315.596192385 210% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27601809955 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07432619952 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82867403969 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 176.041082164 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508295625943 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1097.1 506.74238477 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1974640619 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.620689655 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8620689655 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37931034483 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184473425023 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464046703002 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634917682173 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870935255442 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650785177093 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 189.0 78.4519038076 241% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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