Describe a popular tourist attraction
People worldwide have acknowledged Vietnam for its poetic and picturesque landscapes. Each year, millions of tourists flock to various tourist attractions, but it would be a pity if they missed out Hoi An Ancient Town. It is one of the most popular holiday destinations, commonly favored for three features: a multicultural architecture, harmonious blend between ancient designs and modern elements, and special activities you can only participate here.
Located on the central coast of Vietnam, it was an international trading port from the 16th to the 18th century. Merchants from far and near settled down here during this period, the majority of whom was Japanese and Chinese. Together, they added more versatility to the town's landscape.
Blocks of ancient wooden houses with yin-yang tiled roofs border the roads, along with magnificent temples and pagodas that have exquisitely detailed carvings and statues. Most importantly, colored lanterns are considered Hoi An's trademark. These intricate China - inspired designs are well - balanced with Japanese simple construction such as Covered Bridges.
Later on, in the 19th century, the French left a colonial stamp with colonnaded houses: butter - yellowed walls, red roof, and wooden shutters. Interestingly, Hoi An is able to combine all the foreign elements to form Vietnamese tube houses. This features Chinese tiled roofs, Japanese support joist, and French louvered shutters and lampposts. The town is a mosaic of cultures, which makes it one - of - a - kind and well - known.
Despite preserving ancient features, it also incorporates modern elements to attract tourists. There can be an international clothing brand sold inside a wooden house. Souvenirs like Ao Dai or bamboo root sculptors are displayed along with backpacks or sneakers. Even you can try traditional green tea or stick with favorite matcha milkshake. Whatever type of tourist you are, Hoi An is always capable of satisfying the needs.
Last but not least, engaging in trademark activities is a great way to create personal attachment. Situating besides a peaceful river, Hoi An is an ideal place to relax. You can travel around the town by pedicabs or boats along the river, release flower garlands and try Vietnamese traditional cuisines in a cozy restaurant. However, if you are more of an energetic traveler, the town's busy selling and buying activities take place in all corners. It is perhaps a testimony to the prosperity and restlessness of a once commercial district.
Welcoming millions of tourists for years, Hoi An is still in an incredible state of preservation. Its beauty is incomparable, a synthesis of distinct elements: Western and Asian architecture, modern and ancient features, laid - back and hectic atmosphere. All these factors make it one of the most marketable spots for holidays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42117117117 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96650562959 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 176.041082164 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1770439714 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5769230769 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19230769231 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719740460776 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163674254293 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351802328047 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330578941497 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429408022264 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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