How widely of you think the problems spread that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? what problems will it cause?
Nowadays, the importance of people spending too much time on work rather than their personal life was always a debatable topic. Many people state that spending too much time in office is creating problems in their personal life. I completely agree with this statement. This essay will further elaborate on the reasons for this problem and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are innumerable reasons why spending more time in office is creating issues in personal life. First of all, companies put a lot of pressure on their employees to complete their work within the deadline. Because of that work pressure, people always feel stressed and tired. For example, sometimes employees should have to work on weekends as well because of a heavy workload than they cannot spend time with their family so, it is creating a huge gap from their family. Thus, it is clear that this problem is creating a lot of problem in people life.
Moreover, people can cause many health problems when they do long hours shifts and be sitting in the same place. people can be face health issues like obesity, back problem, stress and many more. In some cases. when people cannot be a balance between personal and professional life than it cause of divorce as well. For instance, according to Time magazine, it is cleared that according to one survey, highest reasons for divorce rate is when people giving not enough time for their family. Thereby, unbalance time, management between personal and professional life will create a lot of issue in their life.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that for a healthy lifestyle and family bonding people have to divide their time between professional and personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
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Suggestion: People
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
... is cleared that according to one survey, highest reasons for divorce rate is when people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94237288136 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43849714244 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494915254237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4599541944 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418064982679 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14943824501 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109762778121 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276233920016 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982987799647 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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