Introduce yourself:
Hello everyone, my name is Nguyen Khoa. I am a 7th-grade student in Ho Chi Minh City. I have many interests and passions, including reading books, playing the piano, and solving math problems.
I am a friendly and energetic person. I enjoy communicating with people and learning about social issues. I am interested in environmental and human health issues. I always strive to learn and develop myself every day.
My strength is in mathematics. I enjoy solving difficult problems and challenging myself in math competitions. I am also a talented pianist, and music helps me connect my intelligence and emotions.
However, I also have some areas that I want to improve, such as my English communication skills and sports training. I want to experience many sports to find the one that suits me best to commit long-term.
I have achieved many accomplishments in academic, artistic, and extracurricular/volunteer activities. I represented Vietnam at the Children's General Assembly 2022, won first prize in the "Growing up with books" contest organized by the Ho Chi Minh City Department of Education and Training, and won a gold medal in the Singapore and Asia Mathematical Olympiad - SASMO 2021, Vietnam's TITAN Mathematics Olympiad - VTMO 2022, and the USA Mathematics AMC8 2022. I also won an encouragement award at the International Junior Math Olympiad 2021 and a bronze medal at the VANDA 2021 International Science Competition and SASMO 2022 Mathematics Olympiad. Additionally, I achieved third place in the Ho Chi Minh City English language category at the IOE 2022 English Olympiad.
Each activity and competition has given me valuable experience and knowledge that helps me become more passionate about my best-performing field. I feel proud of the knowledge and contributions I bring to the community more than the personal achievements I have accomplished. I will continue to develop myself and strive towards the best version of myself I can achieve.
Furthermore, I am a member of Vietnam's Robotics Team participating in the 2023 VEX Robotics World Championship, an Ambassador of the Khan Academy Vietnam Community with a spirit of self-learning and dedication to equal education for Vietnamese students, and a recipient of the IvyPrep Championship 2023 English debating tournament knowledge round trophy and the National Bronze Medal in the 2023 Mathematics Talent Challenge organized by the Vietnam Mathematics Association.
In addition to my academic achievements, I am also passionate about volunteering and engaging in extracurricular activities. I believe that giving back to the community is an important part of personal development, and I have participated in various volunteer programs, such as teaching English to underprivileged children and organizing charity events to raise funds for environmental causes.
I am constantly seeking new challenges and opportunities to learn and grow. Currently, I am a member of the Vietnamese Robotics Team participating in the 2023 VEX Robotics World Championship. I am also serving as the Community Ambassador for Khan Academy Vietnam, promoting self-learning and equal education opportunities for Vietnamese students.
In the future, I hope to continue pursuing my interests in mathematics and music, while also exploring new fields such as robotics and computer science. I am excited about the possibilities that the future holds and am determined to make the most of every opportunity that comes my way.
Thank you for taking the time to read about me, and I look forward to connecting with you. If you have any questions or would like to get in touch, please feel free to email me at greenapple.ad@gmail.com.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-06 | Huỳnh Hưng | 55 | view |
| 2023-03-31 | Nguyễn Nguyên Khoa | 11 | view |
| 2022-03-08 | phanthiminhanh | 55 | view |
| 2021-07-24 | AnhTuyetluvss | 11 | view |
| 2021-06-27 | palmm11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the piano, and solving math problems. I am a friendly and energetic person. I e...
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Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I am a friendly and energetic person. I enjoy communicating with people and lea...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eople and learning about social issues. I am interested in environmental and huma...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... environmental and human health issues. I always strive to learn and develop myse...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d extracurricular/volunteer activities. I represented Vietnam at the Childrens Ge...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...022, and the USA Mathematics AMC8 2022. I also won an encouragement award at the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, third, while, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 10.4138276553 336% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3116.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 577.0 315.596192385 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40034662045 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50440248418 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492201039861 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 976.5 506.74238477 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 5.43587174349 478% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.7647817101 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.448275862 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8965517241 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31034482759 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 8.67935871743 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.