Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

Essay topics:

Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

English language is deemed to be a fundamental requirement of the modern era.Governments must spend much money and place a great bugdet in order to acheive a good education in English language for the students.
It an international language that connects the world and opens horizons in different fields of life.

In Yemen people are not seriously taking care of English language which due to miserable levels in English language .

there are reasons caused this major issue, but I believe that only two of them are main
1- Lack of real interest and concept of some families.
2- Absence of the role of the ministry of education.

In order to overcome this problem, there are practical solutions must come to reality, such as :
1- Establishing intensive courses in English language in the summer vacation for the students.
2- Oraganizing competitions in best English speaker.
3-Teaching English language from early stages -from the first year of the elementary school or even from the KG-

Eventually, I believe that this problem must be taken into consideration from those who have the authority to make a change.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20108695652 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86500629504 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2216482987 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257726237107 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10865603539 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102503335154 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868687328558 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102441709748 0.056905535591 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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