Write a narrative essay about an interesting place you have been to

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Write a narrative essay about an interesting place you have been to.

I am kind of a tourist lover but I don’t have much time to travel due to my busy study. As a result, every vacation is very meaningful to me especially the trip to the Ha Tien coast where I first go to the beach with my friends. That trip gave me many memorable things and interesting activities in the period time of high school.

I was very excited because first time in my life I made a far journey with many unexpected things. I and my three close friends woke up very early 3:00 AM and gathered in the house of one of them to depart for the beautiful beach. We used 2 own motorbikes that we have got driving license and permission of our parents before to move this trip. We divided the role of carrying food, beverages, and necessary belongings into each person as we were afraid of the cost of the items in the destination may be expensive. After checking everything was available, we started a long trip. On the way to the coast, we took breakfast at a small vegetarian restaurant and taken a rest for fifteen minutes. It was a sunny day, but the road too was rough for us to go to the place as expected. However, these difficulties could also help us to experience new feelings of a proper adventure.

We arrived at the coast at 10:00 AM and felt eager to discover that beautiful coast though we were a little tired after a long drive. We were welcomed by a blue and stunning coast with lots of fresh winds. We quickly found a hotel to stay in for just a day, and then we needed to have brunch since our stomachs were fully empty. The taste of food over there was ordinary but its price was very expensive as we predicted. After eating, we prepared swimsuits and enjoyed swimming together. There were too many people swimming on the coast, so we decided to find an area of water that was fewer people and fresher. We played water volleyball together and held a small swimming competition. Besides, it was absolutely a mistake if we had not taken photos of this beautiful beach. We found the photographer standing nearby, and we surely had to pay for each photo taken. I thought the price of every photo was not expensive because of the nice beach. When it came to 13:00, we stopped swimming and started to move to other nearly famous temples. After that, we finished our journey and went home with many cute souvenirs and photos.

Over the years, we have still had no chance to take any trip like that together. However, with attractions and interesting experiences, it was totally one of the best unforgettable memories in my life. We are going to gather and adventure to other beautiful places soon, at least when this pandemic goes over.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tunning coast with lots of fresh winds. We quickly found a hotel to stay in for ju...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, as to, at least, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 486.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47530864198 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50362486788 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 5.43587174349 423% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8724854517 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6538461538 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80769230769 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0456988353557 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0149672767117 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207100477527 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421367595045 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240897226579 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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