Recently, the phenomenon of hobbies and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of having extra activities is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by many substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the hobbies like sports can be a plus, I will analyse throughout this essay.
From the social stand point, hobbies can provide the society with some noticeable effects which is rooted in the fact that relaxation as well as excitement are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when i was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered interest. It is beneficial ramifications of both healthy atmosphere and stress relief apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of psychology, hobbies might increase the consequence of delay work. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of time management relate to this reality that the demerits of wasting time pertain to damage the work. As a tangible example, some scientific research has undertaken by prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of other activities correlated negatively with neglecting important matters. Hence, It is correct to presume preconceived notions of cultural activities.
To conclude, while there is some compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of having hobbies far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of enjoying free time prove the significance of time management. But also pinpoint social implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64197530864 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14749986601 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662551440329 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9704947582 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0205770924584 0.242375264174 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00673369383213 0.0925447433944 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024278678385 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.014242619881 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246689412668 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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