Advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world colossal upsurge in benefits and losses of fast developed industries, society and urban areas. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of cancers in open life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance the most preponderant one in that benefits of living in an era in which new things for new generation like mobiles, laptop, internet and new technology can not only contribute to in internet. But also lead to numbers other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much in case, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as for arguments their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are however, some pitfalls that can easily over whelm the potential benefits of so many advantages of develop technology however most loses of technology like global warming is increasing, population also percentage is very high and birth of new disease. The primary one steam from the effect that by observing the aforementioned trend. People not only realized are gravity. But also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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...e most preponderant one in that benefits of living in an era in which new things ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation like mobiles, laptop, internet and new technology can not only contribute t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95798319328 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74927367776 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.829575979 50.4703680194 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13693662479 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368509757869 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787474964229 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762089523436 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780007313042 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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