Advantages and disadvantages of video games

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Advantages and disadvantages of video games

Video games are the most famous type of game that the children are involved in the present world. Therefore in this essay I will be discussing on the advantages and disadvantages of involving in video games.

Children can get familiar with the modern technology through the video games because some video games gives educational values for them. On the other hand video games also can stimulate children’s mind for innovations.

Nevertheless there can be more disadvantages of playing video games for both children and adults as well. Majority of people waste their time on playing video games which could be used for their education else to contribute to the national income. Since time is the most valuable factor in business world, it is better if people can play video games without getting addict on that. Children are the dangerous victims of being trapped by video games, because their health will deteriorate due to lack of exercise. Despite of the entertainment it provides there is a possibility of people loosing their interactions with their loved ones finally ended up in family disputes.

In conclusion people can use video games for their entertainment purposes together with gathering technological knowhow. Parents bears a vital responsibility of preventing their children in getting addicted on video games. On my point of view even adults can enjoy their leisure time by playing video games without disturbing their lives. Therefore it is recommended to use video games by knowing its pros and cons thoroughly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27530364372 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83548833523 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2380143714 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409446707019 0.242375264174 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172063505435 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08974494516 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29725766055 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929077130783 0.0609392437508 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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