There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the importance of music to it’s culture and also to th e country as well. While some people argue that traditional music is more important than international music, on my point of view we have to focus on conserving our own traditional music than going behind the international music.
First and foremost, there are myriad types of music available in the world such as classical, pop, jazz, reggee and etc. For example, people can listen to music during their leisure hours and it is a mode of relaxation for most of the people. Moreover, music has become a high revenue generation business over past decade. Therefore, governmets have to facilitate their people to learn their own kind of music with sufficient infrastructure and teaching facilities as well. In addition, each country should have a specific kind of music and dancing styles to take their identity to the world.
On the other hand, some people love international music more than traditional music. For instance, most of the younger generation prefer to listen international music, because of their access to inernet and other medias. In order to facilitate them, entertainers has to cater their requirements with an optimal blend of traditional and international music.
In conclusion, it is recommended to take take traditional music to the international market, since the world is becoming a global village with the development of information technology. It is also believed, that developing countries can increase their national revenue through entertainment business, due to the fact that it involves human capability and skills compared with the other technology based industries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ld such as classical, pop, jazz, reggee and etc. For example, people can listen to music...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: take
... In conclusion, it is recommended to take take traditional music to the international ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01637185598 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6698472124 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444235395742 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184774621232 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126177939423 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293543334259 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123280513087 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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