Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
recently, the phenomenon of age discrimination and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and cosequently by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the basis of person age can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
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From a general standpoint, t3 can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered current policies. thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen.
within the realm of a public arena, t4 might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of t5 far outweigh its drawback. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues’ potential complications.can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered current policies. thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen.
within the realm of a public arena, being employed in the first place might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of recently, the phenomenon of t1 and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and cosequently by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that t2 can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, t3 can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered current policies. thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen.
within the realm of a public arena, t4 might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of t5 far outweigh its drawback. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues’ potential complications. far outweigh its drawback. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues’ potential complications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 10.5418719212 294% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 5.94088669951 454% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 20.9802955665 272% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 31.9359605911 251% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3872.0 1207.87684729 321% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 688.0 242.827586207 283% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62790697674 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.12149920406 3.92707691288 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31032543141 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.241279069767 0.580463131201 42% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1243.8 379.143842365 328% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.6157635468 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 15.0 1.71428571429 875% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.65517241379 328% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 12.6551724138 253% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9538419286 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34375 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 6.9802955665 258% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 2.91625615764 411% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0676420357605 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236595573586 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394189530398 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038841011126 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401855673198 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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