Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about
being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older
workers be made illegal?
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement, a dialogue on "Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about
being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older
workers be made illegal?" can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that, There should not be any age discrimination
in decision making. Through the course of this essay, I shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of he
arguments.
In Late 1980's there is a discrimination in the decision making, Older people should make all the decision and everyone
should accept it. It may be wright or wrong no one should oppose it and should follow the route correctly, Because It is accepted that
only older people will have good decision making.
In the current days, age is not considered for decision making, All are well educated and have a good experience mostly
in all the fields. So it is advised that in workplace even they should consider a new-joinee's decision, rather than
waiting for older employee decision. Decision can be taken by any one depending on the situation.
I see that, there is potential evidence to support the arguments i have provided, and hence my opinion is that, There should not
be any age discrimination while taking decisions, In workplace all the employee have a freedom for decision making.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, may, so, well, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20647773279 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.005968591 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6497411258 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.909090909 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441199898498 0.242375264174 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175723213359 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135924971372 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158250073864 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136439392608 0.0609392437508 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.