A common friend is going to the country your friend stays in. Write a letter to that friend to inform him/her about that.
Dear Esther,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to keep you informed about our mutual friend Linda who has plans to visit UK in the upcoming month.
I would like to remind you about Linda, who was our team mate during the internship phase in Canada. We had received help to a great extent from her especially when we had trouble in travel from one place to another. Furthermore, she was like a family to us.
To my surprise, last week I received a call from Linda where she disclosed about her visit to UK for a business meet which is held on 15th November, 2019.Unfortunately, the return flight to Canada is on 20th November. I was wondering if you can take her to a tour around UK as she is unfamiliar with the place. Also, both of you can have a good time together.
Let me know if the above plan works for you. I have sent her contact details via Facebook in order to get in touch with each other. Please write back to me regarding your thoughts on this by next week.
Best regards,
Haritha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2019'.
Suggestion: November 2019
...r a business meet which is held on 15th November, 2019.Unfortunately, the return flight to Can...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...et which is held on 15th November, 2019.Unfortunately, the return flight to Canada is on 20th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, mind you, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39583333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43988042597 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8469244126 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12655494408 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378839718872 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061198972353 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820030441656 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651169996131 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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