All examinations in some countries take place at the end of the academic year, but others spread out throughout an academic year’s. Pros & Cons
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one,s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that can not only contributes of one,s life, but also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more, when it come to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with mush ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas.Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance.Hence, it is apparent why many are favour of .
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92792792793 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93432575742 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.2325316267 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.555555556 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0119091022057 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00568228824589 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106322557208 0.071462118173 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00550603716977 0.151781067708 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0095367361264 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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