Are zoos helping or hunting? Zoos should be banned.
Surely there has been ni time in history where the lives of people have change more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals zoos are helping or hunting has been one of the most contemporary discussions in the topic. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain .Regarding this I will elaborate my view points in given paragraph.
On the one hand, I would like to say that zoos are helping because many animals that lived in jungles. They faces many problems as well as if they lived in zoos they are safely. Their all needes are fulfil the zoos. Zoos observers are helped animals to protect them from ither animals and give them to needed and fresh food. Furthermore, zoos are helped fot animals.
On the other hand, I would like to say that other zoos are hunting. Because the other zoos owners are selfish and they hunted tge animals. They don't give them to eat food and no any protection for them. They keep animals for just earned more money. Moreover, animals were hunting and always unhappy.
In a nutshell, I would like to say that zoos are banned whose owners are have not good facilities for animals .
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...ls. They dont give them to eat food and no any protection for them. They keep anim...
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...ls for just earned more money. Moreover, animals were hunting and always unhappy....
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...ing and always unhappy. In a nutshell, I would like to say that zoos are banned...
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...y that zoos are banned whose owners are have not good facilities for animals .
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...are have not good facilities for animals .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64851485149 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29464663698 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8855689173 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0714285714 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265293839851 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104685183132 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954862134844 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158689219465 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595158285569 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 12.6369458128 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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