confidence as well as knowledge?
Some masses argue that bigger games can only be win by confidence and knowledge does not matter so, confidence as well as knowledge is used to every activity in which person have more knowledge with full confidence to acheive the task .I will explain the views in upcomimg par agraphs.
To begin with, It is very important for individuals to have much knowledge about every thing by which they can perform any task so, alone confidence does not matter to achieve the goal. For instance, In academic exams, person have more confident to perform the written examinations but does not have self preparation for the exams. On the time of exams they will not answer the questions. Moreover, only confident is not much important to gain the success so knowledge is also necessary.
On the other hand, both confidence and knowledge is very important to achieve the goals and objectives. For an example, In speech competition, if a student is fully prepare to deliver the lecture to audience but loosehis confidence in front of audience hten he wont be able to speak a single correct word and his efforts will get wasted. So, confidence is also necessary alongwith knowledge to speak loudly and in clear manner in front of others and in many other tasks.
To conclude, knowledge and confidence level is much required to perform the activities and every task. Individuals have be confident and more know;edgeable to get the success as well as acheive the goals and objectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.892 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68484636432 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.306032908 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432042344507 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181898683602 0.0925447433944 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122670001262 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305386899097 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108929329223 0.0609392437508 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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