Can money bring happiness? What are the other factors that determine happiness in our life.
Money plays a very vital role in our life. People generally held the view that happiness can only be achieved by money. This essay will discuss the reasons why is in fact there are so many factors other than money which also play an equal role in bringing happiness along with money.
To begin with, money is an essential element in our life because we can fulfill our needs only with it. But there are myriad of other factors responsible for happiness in life. Firstly, contentment in life is the essential factor that helps to achieve happiness in our life. If a person does not feel satisfied, even the huge amount of money can not make him happy. For example, a recent study has shown that significant number of rich people across the world are unhappy because they feel dissatisfied in their life.
Furthermore, life circumstances are also very important in bringing happiness in life. Unfavourable situations in life does not let a person happy.A recent survey, for instance, has shown that fourty percent happiness in our life depends on different situations in life. Moreover, physical fitness or well-being is very important to stay happy in life. For example,A person who has been suffering from some disease can not be happy even if he has a lot of money.
To conclude, the role of money can not be ignored in life because it is very essential to live but other factors such as self-contentment, good health and favourable life situations are also crucial for staying happy. In my opinion, happiness in life depends on multiple factors rather than money alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61148933431 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1600077028 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506451602242 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209500054951 0.0925447433944 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858466419813 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351785938442 0.151781067708 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263987282411 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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