Can money bring happiness? What are the other factors that determine happiness in our life.
Money plays a very vital role in our life. People generally held the view that happiness can only be achieved by money. This essay will discuss the reasons why is in fact there are so many factors other than money which also play equal role in bringing happiness along with money.
To begin with, money is an essential element in our life because we can fullfill our needs only with it. But there are myraid of other factors responsible for happiness in life. Firstly, contentment in life is the essential factor that helps to achieve happiness in our life. If a person does not feel satisfied, even the huge amount of money can not make him happy. A recent study, for example, has shown that significant number of rich people across the world are unhappy because they feel dissatisfied in their life.
Furthermore, life circumstances are also very important in bringing happiness in life. Unfavourable situations in life does not let a person happy. Moreover, physical fitness or well-being is very important to stay happy in life. A person, for instance, who has been suffering from some disease can not be happy even if he has a lot of money.
To conclude, the role of money can not be ignored in life because it is very essential to live but other factors such as self-contentment, good health and favourable life situations are also crucial for staying happy. In my opinion, happiness in life depends on multiple factors rather than money alone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61972110796 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1470178344 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504084941082 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199823448256 0.0925447433944 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947803879433 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341312725631 0.151781067708 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370806974961 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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