Career Plan
Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doing in your country. (minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)
Egypt is now witnessing a social, economic, and scientific renaissance. It is a long and continuous process which requires the participation of every society member, each one in his own way and his own job. It will not matter what is your profession, you just need to believe in this country ability to rise in order to make use of yourself and serve your society.
As a short term plan, I intend to strengthen my laboratory by acquiring international accreditation such as ISO 15189 Medical laboratories, CAP accreditation, and RIQAS. I also intend to apply the latest techniques and acquire the latest analytical devices and test kits in order to better serve the patients. Additionally, I intend to conduct a training program for graduate students of medical colleges in order to give them a chance to help in the process of diagnosing patients in order to give them suitable medical care.
My longer term plans include applying what I have learned in my Chevening program course to make a breakthrough in the field of medical laboratories. I hope that one day I will be the owner of the largest laboratory chain in Egypt so that I could open branches in remote areas to serve the marginalized and the poor.
- Studying in the UKOutline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future. Please do not duplicate the information you have entered 77
- Career PlanChevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doin 55
- Studying in the UK Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future Please do not duplicate the information you have entered 16
- NetworkingChevening is looking for individuals with strong professional relationship-building skills, who will engage with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Please explain how you build and maintain relation 11
- NetworkingChevening is looking for individuals with strong professional relationship-building skills, who will engage with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Please explain how you build and maintain relation 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ociety. As a short term plan, I intend to strengthen my laboratory by acquiring...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98906380247 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.2091284905 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089804762413 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358958354903 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457729802004 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597320714201 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185173682751 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.