Certain kind of music helps learning in life. Do you agree or disagree??
One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the Music. There is wide spread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns. It can be agreed that, Music is important in our life for many reasons. This essay will be discussing about why music is important in our life.
At the outset, there is deluge of argument in the favor of my sentences. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that, Music is very important in our life because it helps me feel relaxed to our mind. It has helped to create certain emotions whether happy, clam, sad, angry, scared, etc. It allows me to safely explore different emotions. I personally believe that Music plays an instrumental role in our society.
Now days, there are many advantages in our life. In general, music has a lot of influence and has a lot of forms of behavior and it helps in mood swings. For example, some time people has lots of work and very depressed mind so they listen to the music and relax in your mind.
In light of discussion above, it can be concluded that the impact of Music is prominent and many advantages in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e and has a lot of forms of behavior and it helps in mood swings. For example, so...
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...nent and many advantages in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45094703265 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9954479402 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20489538258 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704797368636 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500904684588 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124533817044 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219271804662 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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