Certain kinds of music promote learning in their life. Agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the certain kinds of music improve learning in their life. There is widespread worry that this would only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
There are numbers of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant is that the music is building our important daily health. The concentration and memory power improved the learning by the music. Needless to say, all this merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence are on.
Another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that music is fighting against the stress while the learning any boarding subject. Not only music gives enjoyment but creatively also gives learning kind of the methods. Besides, the students are creating team and Mack musical bend, It is beneficial to learn makes the team.<span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">For example, students have stage fear will be able to boost self-confidence and build positive attitude while learning and playing different musical instruments.</span> Hence, it is clear why many favour of music is best for learning any subjects and any field. In addition,t<span style="font-size: 17.6px; white-space: normal;">he people who learn music can also learn a valuable session in discipline. Music is the fabric of our society and it can shape abilities and characters. For instance, the Famous musician, Yesudas from India, have learnt different types of music in his childhood which made him to build his career as singer.</span>
In view of the arguments outline above one can close that music is help to learning but also important for extra special activity is the most ideal way to deal with situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30957726199 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.600783503 50.4703680194 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277645728355 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101969134529 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890981353473 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154502883252 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566964548559 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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