Cheating and lying are sometimes acceptable.
Cheating and lying seem to pervade all levels of society, from the playground to
international politics. Many people find all forms of deceit unacceptable while
others are the perpetrators of this deceit. This essay will argue that there are
several reasons why cheating and lying is unacceptable in all situations.
Cheating and lying can result in the breakdown of trust between friends, family
members, and business partners. Trust is the basis of all relationships, personal
and business. For example, promises that are not kept can result in long term
difficulties in reliability, predictability, certainty and closing deals made between
people. This can have negative long term consequences for all parties involved.
Everyone has the right to know the truth. Deceiving people can cause false hope.
Even in the case of a person experiencing a terminal illness, it is appropriate that
the truth be understood, and deception avoided. The right to be told the truth as it
is understood is fundamental to human health and well being.
This essay has argued that cheating and lying is never acceptable because it
breaks down trust which is the basis of healthy relationships, even in the face of
terminal illness. I maintain that in matters of human communication and
relationship building, the absence of cheating and lying is best adhered to in
order to build confidence and long term partnerships.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3407079646 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03287195887 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0410159307 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178064357057 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630120197111 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805345983453 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605914814325 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978969563236 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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