Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's globalized world, Environment pollution should be dealt with seriously by people and the governing bodies. This essay will further argue that environmental pollution must be handled by citizens by providing relevant arguments and examples.

To begin with, all kinds of pollution are increasing drastically due to the greedy and careless behavior of humans. Humans dump the food, electronic, plastic and many other varieties of waste which is also toxic onto land and water; furthermore, they are polluting water by toxic chemical fertilizers. In addition, people are not aware of the consequences of environmental pollution because most people are not educated effectively on pollution. People must learn to dispose of waste safely in order to recycle and reuse the byproduct of waste. For example, People are using plastic materials for a single time use that are non degradable and later dump such waste into land and water.

Secondly, Governing bodies are not keen on ensuring a clean environment that is heavily polluted by clearing all land and water waste periodically; nevertheless, people are forced to pay heavy income taxes as well as land taxes. Furthermore, they have no clear plans in their rule to enforce prevent pollution and create awareness among people. For instance, the recent bureaucracy has disappointed people's expectations by not providing quick relief after the flood in November 2004 in Chennai.

In conclusion, Not only the government but also every individual must consider looking into various ways of curbing environmental pollution. citizens should undertake the responsibility of creating awareness among society and ensure a clean environment by safe disposal of wastes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...ays of curbing environmental pollution. citizens should undertake the responsibility of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67391304348 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02304945003 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634782608696 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4766081321 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109817429602 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430676420904 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492586339885 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616847440911 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603492347244 0.0609392437508 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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