In recent years, there is a colossal upsurge that the government should build more roads or increase the network of public transport. Some people think there are myriad of reasons to build more roads that may lead to detrimental repercussions, other argue that improving the network of public transport will help the society. This essay will discuss how improving the network of public transport will help the society.
Firstly, the number of vehicles on road will reduce by improving the network of public transport. Not only it will reduce the traffic jam but also reduce air pollution. For example, China, a pioneer in the network of public transport, has decreased the percentage of vehicles on roads by providing a good network of public transport. Thus, needless to say, it is essential to have a good network of public transport.
Secondly, revenue generated by public transport can help the society in many aspects. Although many people prefer to travel by their own vehicle, it may force them to use public transport. For instance, the Indian government, prominent leader in the public transport, has helped the society in ample ways. Hence, needless to say, the government must build a better network of public transport.
In conclusion, this essay propounds the view that the government must not build more roads. Further, it is essential that people make cognizance of the fact and use public transport. In my opinion, it is essential to use public transport to avoid traffic and build a benevolent society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.116 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68167410399 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5677472857 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342153796694 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142508344734 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905416588248 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219386894593 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389475297854 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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