Globalization is evolving the world at a very rapid pace. While some people believe that globalization will have a significant impact to our society, others argue that globalization will help in creating a better future for the world. This essay will discuss about the impacts of globalization to our society in positive manner as not only countries are getting connected through it but also it is preserving their culture.
First of all, globalization is helping in building more interactive world. As the level of interaction between countries is increasing in trading, there is a significant rise in economy for many countries. For example, China exports most of its products and earns million of dollars every month. Thus, globalization is helping boost financial condition of several countries.
Second of all, globalization has minimal impact to the countries because the countries preserve thier culture. Although some people may believe globalization is destoying cultural values, it is in reality helping the nations to have better culture. For example, Japan presevers its culture as they do not import goods and products over a defined limit from other countries. As a result, it leads to minimal impact to the culture of the country.
In conclusion, this essay has provided good information on globalization in our society and propounds the view that globalization has minimal effect on our society. It is advised that people make congnizance of the fact and promote globalization throughout all countries. In my opinion, globalization is helping all the countries around the world to grow together in many aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... exports most of its products and earns million of dollars every month. Thus, globaliza...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34630350195 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06238288272 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.198149165 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22178348191 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848174479442 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567397798541 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147113496318 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559813987858 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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