Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while others believe they promotes self restraint and discipline.Choose which side you most agree with and discuss why you choose that position. Support yo

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Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while others believe they promotes self restraint and discipline.
Choose which side you most agree with and discuss why you choose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Since the beginning of the 21st century, new type of sports, which includes violence, has increased dramatically. Some people believe that combat sports improve the self confidence and rise the discipline, while others argue that such these sports could increase the violence within the society. This essay will discuss how practicing combat sports can lead to spread the violence withing the community and increase the domestic violence.
Firstly, Increasing popularity of combat sports make people behave more aggressive and therefore increasing the violence between people. Learning sports, which contain some risky movements, may make people to use these movements rather than using another peaceful methods. Recent study, which was conducted in
Washington University, has shown that 90% of American people people, who are involved in combat sports, use what they have learnt during their lives, which consequently, has contributed to spread of violence within the American societies. Therefore, it seems clear that spread of popularity of combat sports has contributed significantly in increasing the violence.
Secondly, some people think that these types of sports are making people more nervous. They feel that they are strong enough to take their rights by hands rather than by lay. Recent research, which was conducted in Jordan, has shown that people, who already have involved in the combat sports, are less obeying to the law and they are more inclination to take their rights by their hands. Thus, it seems clear that it is important to prevent sports which lead to increase the violence.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why the popularity of the combat sports should be limited. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that practicing of any type of violent sports should be prevented and there are alternative methods to improve the individual discipline and self confidence far from these violent sports.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 5.94088669951 286% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39735099338 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60060078143 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6267319626 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294464837014 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118066925255 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810038034875 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17366226822 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583087499825 0.0609392437508 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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