A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the beginning of the 21st century, schools and universities have adopted a new approach which motivate students to become more creative. Some people believe that creating a competitive environment in schools and universities is essential and should be encourage, while others argue that adopting a competitive environment will increase the stress and anxiety on students. This essay will discuss how students could be affected positively by creating a competitive environment inside schools and universities and it enhances the students performance.

Creating a competitive environment in schools and universities motivates students to study hard. This will lead to improve the results of students and they act more efficiently when they graduate from their schools. Recent research, which was conducted in Cambridge university, has shown that adopting a competitive environment in schools causes increasing the students outcomes significantly. Therefore, it seems clear that students behavior is affected largely with the surrounding environment and competitive environment is crucial.

Om the other hand, some people think that creating a competitive environment put more stress on students. Students feel sick and frustrated due the existence of the competition. But these people are unaware of the fact that applying pressure on people during studying forces them to become more creative and to endure the difficulties of their future lives. Thus, a competitive environments is very important and must be adopted in all schools.

In conclusion, this essay discussed the importance of applying a competitive environment inside schools and universities. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that all educational organizations must select the competitive program in their polices.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
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Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'environment'?
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...their future lives. Thus, a competitive environments is very important and must be adopted i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21122772021 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518939393939 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6517959532 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214537628486 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943667526938 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700146952917 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143580201823 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510103100578 0.0609392437508 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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