companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometime they don't need.give your opinion about this practice.
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of masses have been changed dramatically. A quik reflection on typical day reveal companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things one of the most prominent topic . People have always held some conflicting views on this eassy. I will discuss my view on the upcoming paragraphes.
The first and foremost view is that, there are many companies which sale their products with the help of advertisements. Moreover, some products are beneficial for folks and some are not good. some companies sale damaged and harmful products with the use of advertisement For instance, large number of masses buy online products after reading the advertisement but companies mentioned wrong information in advertisement.
Moving further, celebrities give advertisements of products like shampoos, clothes, shoes and so on without knowing its positive and negative impact. For instance,celebrities give advertisements for money and publicity they force their fans to buy unwanted things and some peoples buy that thing but after sometime that good show their negative impact.
In conclusion, advertisement are very good for companies because they sale their products with the use of advertisement but on the other hand there are many demerits of this. Advertisement force us to buy unwanted goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4619047619 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18443210056 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4709457503 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25428074852 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959198921002 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879109816778 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164679484916 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390142140006 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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