Is competitive environment in school or university good or bad? Discuss and give your own experiences as examples.
In this competitive and fast moving era, there us a massive competition in the world in each area. There are many advantages of competitive environment in school and university if one can take it in positively. Many argues that because of the competitive environment sometimes people are taking wrong decision in fear of failure. My view is that there disadvantages outweigh over advantages. I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both the side of arguments.
To begin with, advantages of competitive environment in school and university. There are enormous benefit if one can take it positive in this competitive era. For example, If we make our school and university competitive than people do hard work to get success. The other example is that nowadays from kindergarten school children are learning all activates and teachers became school environment very competitive so all students take part in all activities and students will be trained from the age of five so competitive environment is helpful for students growth.
In the contrary part, there are also disadvantages of competitive environment. Competitive environment discourage the students and they have high degree of fear of failure and sometimes they can take negative decision which will be danger for their family and society.
By analyzing the both side s of experience, I strongly recommend that Competitive environment is good for success if we take competitive environment positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40948275862 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15222386723 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8223092036 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243260244112 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102845464036 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718786117988 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162674718496 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490712575714 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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