Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the effects of computer technology on our society. There is widespread worry that this would only lead to myriad of concerns for the public. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that computers not only changed the way of our lives but it has also eased the way we used to perform our daily tasks and has replaced conventional methods with high speed, accuracy and much control. Furthermore, computer technology has totally reformed the manufacturing process which brought an industrial revolution in the world in the form of high efficiency, high productivity and low cost. Needless to say, all these benefits stand something in good stead which helped to evolve our lives totally. Similarly, computers are playing a pivotal role for the businesses, hospitals, police and airports as compared to past. For instance, 100 years ago it was quite difficult to write and control the manual work. Moreover, it has reduced the time and manpower cost which was inevitable in the past for the employers. On the other hand, educational institutes got the utmost benefits of computer technology in the form of e-books, presentations which has remolded the teaching methods. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the computer technology.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of computer technology are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09765625 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88349786484 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9080770425 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946144290444 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306710281339 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241807916863 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703704062137 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00630975015173 0.0609392437508 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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