'Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
These days there is an ongoing debate among people about computer technology. Some argue that it is beneficial while others oppose this statement. This has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. The below write-up puts forth my views on the same followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Computers have tremendous impact on society. There are various advantages of these machines. First and foremost, these are fast and reliable and all the calculations are done in seconds. Secondly, these machines never exhaust. For instance, in IBM, the datacenter is running from years without restart.
As every coin has two sides, there are several drawbacks too. One major disadvantage is that, due to automation, many people are losing their jobs. Moreover, excessive use of computers is harmful for eyes. For example, according to a recent survey in India, almost 40 percent of kids have weak eyesight as they are addicted to computer games.
In my opinion, Computers are boon for the mankind as it provides numerous benefits. However, for some people the opposite is true.
Taking everything into consideration, the points discussed above are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion and I would like to accentuate the fact that, computers should be used effectively and efficiently for best results.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24545454545 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81166401717 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686363636364 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1444742087 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.125 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883755058793 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291109920982 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366332820494 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436520263485 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276218985592 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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