Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Computer has changed the way people work and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. While some people think that computers are making people lazy and curtail their mental strength, others believe that technology has not negative impact at all. I preferred to support those people who are in the favor of computer technology. This essay will discuss both views in detail with an example.
To begin with, the main purpose of computer is to help human to solve sophisticated problems in seconds. Before the advent of computer, people had to spent days to solve a mathematical problem, but now it is possible to solve mathematical problems in seconds. Those people who maintain computer advancements have negative impact on human's life. They have underestimated the rich benefits of technology for instance, researchers suggested that gadgets are not just for scientist to solve complex problems, but also it can be useful to gain income at home.
On the other hand, people are using computers in their daily life to do various kinds of things or activities such as, entertainment, education, research, etc. It can help a person to gain knowledge without paying large amount of tuition fees at some university or college. Due to the computer technology there are many prominent companies in the world, which are making optimistic impact on the world. Thus, computer cannot have any kind of adverse impact in society, because it has outraged all the possible negative impacts.
In conclusion, people have different perspective about computer, and its impact on society. In my opinion, technology has the potential to make the world better and secure place, which will eventually improve the overall quality of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...er advancements have negative impact on humans life. They have underestimated the rich...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74757546181 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4320895894 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165273638565 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623034321676 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363804044787 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100421549116 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036535808201 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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