Dangerous activities like extreme skiing and bungee jumping etc. Are becoming popular. Do you support it or not.
From birth to death, most of our efforts are concerned with fulfillment of basic needs, like food, shelter and clothing. This topic is about some dangerous sports like extreme skiing and jumping have become popular. I support those activities and I will discuss some reasons in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, these activities become source of income for those people, who participate in these sports due to which they can earn easily and they can live proper life. Moreover, players get name and fame due to these activities, because sometime winners get awards from president and famous celebrities and they get better opportunities of employments.
Apart from this, it is the good source of entertainment, because lots of people like to watch these sports and most of time foreigners come for watching these activities, which also helpful in increasing the economy. Furthermore, many people get chance of employment due to which unemployment will be decreased from the country. Besides this, if people get works then they will not choose the astray due to this crime rate will also demolished, from the nation.
In conclusion, it can be said that extreme sports are beneficial for people, but to some extent it also dangerous. So that players should take precautions while playing. Government should also provide help and safety for those players.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...e winners get awards from president and famous celebrities and they get better opportunities of em...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'demolish'
Suggestion: demolish
...astray due to this crime rate will also demolished, from the nation. In conclusion, it ca...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., but to some extent it also dangerous. So that players should take precautions while p...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18636363636 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66633047123 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1758143772 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.727272727 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119650994965 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549215156377 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988767832695 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08704228775 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109617755228 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.