new Doctors should work in rural areas discuss,
The sustainable influence of working in rural areas have sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend over years. cities are developing or developed but rural areas lack the facilities necessary for development so they come under the range of under-developed areas. there are many reasons for the partial development of some areas in our country .this essay will elaborate how the idea of working in rural areas will lead to expected change in the society.
At the outset, there are numerous ways how new doctors can be encouraged to work in the rural areas but most conpicious one stems from the fact that they require the sophisticated atmosphere to enjoy there work . As an illustration, doctors always serve others and patients have faith in doctor more than they believe in medications, also the matter of fact states that patients from cities can easily travel to rural areas to get the treatment . On the other hand , the less developed transport system unables the people in rural areas to get the treatment hence they need doctors available to them .
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that people in rural areas are unaware of all technological advancement and related details whereas doctors have a key detail of everythung , it may be handling patients and also with ease and using the latest technology. so therefore it is more preferred that doctors must promote alternate shifts to diagnose patients of rural areas.
To recapitulae, every human needs a proper treatment for better living , so doctors can move on specific days to help and diagnose people in rural areas . this will also encourage a standardised living and disease free society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10752688172 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74291060905 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0281509432 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338816176225 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140703007733 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725337677308 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196053420325 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728097830875 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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