Dangerous activities like extreme
skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether u support them or not.
The popularity of the extreme or the adventurous sports has grown over the last decade. These sports activities are exercised to a higher degree, greater altitude and much physical exertion. This essay will compare both the pros and cons of performing these activities and my viewpoints for which holds more weight-age will be provided.
Firstly, as these are outdoor dangerous activities so it requires the performer to come out of his comfort zone and think out of the box. Any kind of physical outdoor activity like para-gliding, scuba diving, water-rifting, skiing and bungee jumping requires one to involve the interaction between a large number of groups of muscles so it promotes a larger amount of physical exercise as compared to the indoor activity. Secondly, it helps to develop self-motivation, confidence and determination in one's self and therefore eliminates the negative feelings such as lack of confidence and depression.
As these are sophisticated activities so high level of skills and precise timings are very important. A small single mistake can lead to serious injuries. For example, in the case of snowboarding, as these are exercised over uneven terrains with many avalanches, so there is a good probability that a fallen tree may be hidden beneath huge deposition of snow drifts and un-cautiously an athlete can collide with it, producing severe impact and pains.
In the view of the above discussion and the provided arguments, I personally support these extreme activities but initially, these should be implemented under the supervision of an expert guide as to avoid self-damage in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30888030888 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05809055305 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6489799056 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112887706994 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038814272038 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381201448167 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615024340783 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352961538587 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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