Different people are sucessful in different fields. Some people work long hours to get sucess, but other feel that we should spend free time for fun than money? which styel colsely related to you and explains ypur opinion?
The important of people are sucessful in different fields. Some people work long hour to get sucess, but others feel that we should spend free time for fun than money which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of people spend more time in fun than work has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these trend. In my opinion, it can be agreed that people should spend more free time in fun and enjoy than long working hours which helps to be relax and refreshed.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people spend free time in fun than work but the most conspicious on stem"s from the fact that people spending free time in travel and fun helps to build strong relationship with family members or colleuges. As an illustration, people spending more time in fun helps to decrease stress and helps to be helathy in mental health. A study shows that a president of nepal take a 1 week of leave for fun in 2010 after leave he become prime minister of nepal. In addition, people having break during work helps to mantian healthy and peace environment at home. Thus, to be a sucessful a person should work less and should have fun at free time which helps to buid a carrer.
Neverthless, there remain same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of people should take a break and have a fun at free time but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that more fun will bring a stress due to finincial cricis. For instance people should work more for carrer and personal development.
From what has been given above it can be concluded in the fact that people should spend time more in fun than money is prominent althoug the way of people working more than fun should be well handled.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64240506329 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39828116025 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471518987342 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8256396831 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463005973373 0.242375264174 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212516722134 0.0925447433944 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127993715852 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311844465164 0.151781067708 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150121690733 0.0609392437508 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.1260098522 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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