Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans?
We humans have reached inexplicable heights in exploring a world beyond our own planet and have attained colossal results in the same too. Space travel and research have allowed us to learn a lot more of our origin and existence. But we humans have more crucial problems that affect are day to day lives that no one seems to be bothered about, one such life threatening problem is global warming. The essay will further discuss on this concern and how so little is being done to help resolve it.
Every human is very well aware about the rising concerns with pollution and how many factors such as increasing vehicles and factories, reducing forest among other factors are affecting it, still we are reluctant to take any action to find a solution to this but are very well willing to invest billions on space research. It is much like we are more interested in the beauty and excitement offered by other planets than the livelihood out own dying planet has been providing. Spaceships and other space research equipment’s are enormous in sizes and cost handsomely whereas the solution to our actual current problems could be resolved by probably introducing some simple technologies to tackle them.
Resolving such crucial problems is not only important but is also very crucial for our survival. A good example of a step taken towards resolving this issue is given by Tesla, wherein they introduced battery operated vehicles that lets out much lesser carbon imprints and harmful emissions. As it is proven then and again the technology used in such inventions is much less complicated and requires much less when compared with space research.
To conclude, the time and money to be invested in resolving the current issues that threaten our existence is much cheaper and convenient than what it takes in space travel.
We humans have reached inexplicable heights in exploring a world beyond our own planet and have attained colossal results in the same too. Space travel and research have allowed us to learn a lot more of our origin and existence. But we humans have more crucial problems that affect are day to day lives that no one seems to be bothered about, one such life threatening problem is global warming. The essay will further discuss on this concern and how so little is being done to help resolve it.
Every human is very well aware about the rising concerns with pollution and how many factors such as increasing vehicles and factories, reducing forest among other factors are affecting it, still we are reluctant to take any action to find a solution to this but are very well willing to invest billions on space research. It is much like we are more interested in the beauty and excitement offered by other planets than the livelihood out own dying planet has been providing. Spaceships and other space research equipment’s are enormous in sizes and cost handsomely whereas the solution to our actual current problems could be resolved by probably introducing some simple technologies to tackle them.
Resolving such crucial problems is not only important but is also very crucial for our survival. A good example of a step taken towards resolving this issue is given by Tesla, wherein they introduced battery operated vehicles that lets out much lesser carbon imprints and harmful emissions. As it is proven then and again the technology used in such inventions is much less complicated and requires much less when compared with space research.
To conclude, the time and money to be invested in resolving the current issues that threaten our existence is much cheaper and convenient than what it takes in space travel.
- Many people think region effect successful person Whats your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong 73
- Advanced medical technology expands human life. Do you think it is a blessing or a curse? 74
- Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet people are increasingly suffering from fitness and diet related issues. Why is this happening and what can be done to prevent it? 73
- Many university students live with their families, while others live away fromtheir home because their universities are in different places. What are theadvantages and disadvantages of both situations? 56
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes littl 35
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le is being done to help resolve it. Every human is very well aware about the...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... simple technologies to tackle them. Resolving such crucial problems is not o...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s when compared with space research. To conclude, the time and money to be in...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le is being done to help resolve it. Every human is very well aware about the...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... simple technologies to tackle them. Resolving such crucial problems is not o...
^^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s when compared with space research. To conclude, the time and money to be in...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 10.5418719212 398% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 8.36945812808 406% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 20.9802955665 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 31.9359605911 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3084.0 1207.87684729 255% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 614.0 242.827586207 253% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02280130293 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.977853291 3.92707691288 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58633562791 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.301302931596 0.580463131201 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 964.8 379.143842365 254% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6551724138 174% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3207355741 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176864320677 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675132014578 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484876576605 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10839019031 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287007741914 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.