Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans.
In recent years, there has been limitless upsurge in the ongoing detrimental facets over humans and as well as space explorations impacts be it an impoverished or affluent nation. In this essay, I will elaborate both the escalating and plummeting facets towards space travel and the present problems encountered by humans.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits, firstly, in today’s advance technology, space travel made easier to understand in studying the predict and drastic impacts effecting on the earth. For example, according to researcher a study done by NASA team find out the mitigating effect of the cancer which made it possible by survey done on space travel with many other positive benefits over health care, moreover, it also gave us the outdo understanding over the environment effects on temblor, global warming and climate change, clearly, space travel predicts beforehand the adverse effects on the surface of the earth.
Moreover, to some of the benefits on space travel, there are crucial problem that arouse in today’s environment where people are facing with upcoming problems in global warming. For instance, in most of the countries because of enormous population growth resulting to increase expenditure cost, transportation and so on, which are some of the major causes to effect the greenhouse gas emission and thus resulting the problems for human health, economic crisis, increase mortality rates. Apparently, it is imperative to accentuate to limit the crucial problems for which human is affected.
To recapitulate from the above aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having a positive triumphant in the technology, but the upsides of negative impacts shall be considered to have greener vicinity in always and which are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40636042403 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89324427167 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9533530564 50.4703680194 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.25 104.977214359 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.9669160288 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.25397266985 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214350346163 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102460978943 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899749449545 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111698298613 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722203392491 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 12.6369458128 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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