Discuss whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals design of building has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it have positive or negative impact on people’s life. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad positive impacts of modern buildings. The First and foremost, good infrastructure motivates employees to work harder with full dedication. As a case in point, performing work in good environment, they put their all efforts to enhance the growth of company. Probing ahead, proper ventilation systems encourage worker to represent their skills very well. They do better work to get fulfillment.
Moving further, modern building provides proper privacy to employees and good privacy space have less chance of catching ailments such as, Allergy, dust disease and many more. From the above analysis, it is clear that health of masses totally depend upon the construction and design of new buildings.
To conclude, I firmly believe that good infrastructure of building provides proper facilities to employees and employees have major role in company’s growth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40291262136 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90437749188 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9724796063 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33480860942 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986925796743 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120220217203 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165602822641 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126656020672 0.0609392437508 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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