Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?

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Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?

Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals imitating lifestyle has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it is good or bad for common man. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraph.
To begin with, there are myriad merits of following to celebrities. The first and foremost, artists and celebrities motivate today’s generation by doing hard work. As a case in point, some bollywood stars like, shahrukh khan and Akshay kumar had humble background, they started their career from bottom and achieve good name and fame. Youngsters follow them and learn plenty of good habits or work skills from them, which help people to fulfill their dreams.
On the contrary, every rose has its own thorns so there are some negative impacts of following them. First, some people adopt bad habits by watching their movies or advertisements, so masses become habitual of smoking as well as drinking which cause a lot of ailments and harmful for their body.
To conclude, I firmly believe that imitating celebrities is good way o become like them, but youngsters do not follow their bad habits which create troubles in their life.

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Average: 8.2 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02252252252 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.614029594 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3402198256 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194869923577 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600149453051 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064795010926 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117680583091 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599633648578 0.0609392437508 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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