Do Sports & Games Create Disturbance In Students’ Life. Discuss.
The importance of do sports and games create distrubance in students life which was always debatable has now become more controversial with some people claiming that it is benficial while others some people reject this notion. This substantial influence trend has sparked controversy potential impact over o recent years. In my opinion former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will positive impacts and elaborate my viewpoints upcoming paragraphs and lead to logical conclusion.
These are myriad reasons further explain my arguments one of the most preponderant one can stems benefit that when we play sports or games with the help of we physically fit, and we choose career to sport. it is very beneficial their skills with help of sports we improve their skills and physically fitness. For instance, some students are not good in study but they good in sports and they choose sports for their carrier. Cristian ronaldo is best example.
Elaborating my view points and arguments are positive impact one can stems benefit their improve their skills, some students are regularly study and he feel bored then they play some outdoor games they feel relaxes and energetic. For instance, games are play crucial role their daily routine.
According to my viewpoints aforementioned above, some arguments it is benefit their growth economy indeed too great.
- improving the network of public transport 72
- music is an important as other subjects in school 77
- some people think the advertising is bad because it encouraged people to buy things they do not need or cannot afford while others believe that advertisement is good because it can improve people s lives 77
- cars and airplane in modern life 72
- parents should be held legally responsible 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3196347032 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61332462727 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3742929031 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154729812766 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508825804331 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063285784442 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801282008075 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520596704838 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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