Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of product producers to avoid extra packaging of the products.
Product designers are now putting significant efforts to improve the look and feel of the boxes in which the products reach the consumers. But this over-emphasis on packaging often results in wastage of resources. While some people believe that it is the responsibility of consumers to boycott products which have excessive packing, others maintain that it should be controlled during the manufacturing phase of the product. This essay will discuss why consumers will never be in the right position to curb over packaging and, therefore it should be the responsibility of product owners to keep the packaging moderate.
Of all the factors that determine the purchasing decision of an average shopper, price is the major aspect. Even if a consumer finds that a product is over packaged, he might be tempted to buy it if the price is within his budget. A recent survey shows that majority of consumers chose products with lower price tag, no matter the packaging. Under these circumstances, there is no reason to believe that consumers should check over packaging issue.
Despite the inability of consumers, some people believe that efficient utilization of packaging resources is the responsibility of consumers. What they don’t understand is that, not all consumers have same level of awareness or expertise in this matter. For example, people who have not completed a university degree cannot understand all the packaging styles and needs. This makes it clear that it should be the responsibility of manufacturers to curtail the trend of over packaging consumer products.
This essay discussed the inability of consumers to totally avoid certain products and varying awareness among consumers in the matters of environmentally friendly packaging. In my opinion, product owners should take up the responsibility to make sure their products are not over packaged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36949152542 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02105985424 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5450992632 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369878330242 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128292422715 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763710919566 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232598016084 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707243291635 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.