Recently, the fenomenon of tourism's disadvantages for some developed countries and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that tourism industery is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that tourism industry can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From my standpoint, tourism industry can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that tourist, as well as, dynamic economy, are intextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the potential financial advantages of the tourism industry.
Within the realmof culture, peresenting servises to tourists by people and communication with them might change and enhance their cultural level. Moreover, fundemetial aspects of this changing relate to this reality that the benefits of this encountering pertain to keep the native traditions by people. as a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the collapse of traditions is corelated negatively with lack of awareness.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of developing the tourism industry is far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73853211009 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1776146842 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6746733752 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 139.0 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183626213661 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673749060907 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475940028995 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956483986499 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352876758104 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.32886699507 138% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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