Does law change the people's way of behaving? Discuss.
Laws create a society with proper rules and regulations which every citizen must abide in order to avoid discomfort as it is for their own betterment. Legislation plays a pivotal role in the development of a society in a socially acceptable manner, thus I am consummately in accord with the given statement that laws do alter the masses way of behaving.
To commence, there is no ambiguity in saying that, laws create a society in a propitious manner which is of paramount as it ascertain harmony among the public. Also, it creates a fear factor into the mind of criminals who do not even think once before attempting a heinous or repetitive crime, but will consider reckoning in the presence of a legal force upon them. As it is a widely known factor that crimes like drug-abuse, rape, murder, extortion are the social ills of the society, therefore adoption of behavioral lenience towards following the needful laws will mitigate the extent of occurrence of such abysmal activities.
Moreover, favorable ambience of the area due to less crime will also captivate the tourists in an enormous manner which will not only ascend the tourism level to an utmost extent, but will also possibly augment the employability for the different classes of people, therefore, heading a region towards unprecedented development. Not to forget, that further absence of laws can put the whole civilization at the peril of life all the time as people are rendered with unnecessary liberalism which may result in the catastrophic situations such as war, group conflicts, innocent slaughtering etcetera.
Eventually, it can be articulated that, legislation under government is must in order to avoid the hassle as lots of groups are made on the basis of color, caste and religion which can be controlled and regulated only with a legal force upon them. Hence, laws are must to assert the harmony and ascertain robust fellowship in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a propitious manner" with adverb for "propitious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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... crime will also captivate the tourists in an enormous manner which will not only ascend the tourism ...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... legal force upon them. Hence, laws are must to assert the harmony and ascertain robust...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86028161856 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4869997576 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.888888889 104.977214359 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5555555556 20.9669160288 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826617163302 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038095179578 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302518742571 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496905539112 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217947988061 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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