What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?
The topic of extreme sports which was always debateable has now become more contoversialwith many people claimimg that it is beneficial while other reject this notion.In my opinion I am on both sides. This essay will further elaborae this argument. My reasons for both positive and negative point of this trend. There are lots of reasons which will further elaborate this trend but the most ponderant one stem from the fact is that with extreme sports courage is develop inside us . Moreover, these type of sports are very beneficial for our health also as they make our body and muscles strong, strengthens our bones, makkes our mind sharp.All these merrits stand in good stead.. Besides the above merits it also has demerits. extreme sports are very dangerous moreover it can lead to mishappening. Any type of accident can occur.For example few days back a boy died while paragliding Hence we can conclude that it has both advanta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 1207.87684729 64% => OK
No of words: 157.0 242.827586207 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93630573248 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5227771885 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707006369427 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 379.143842365 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6397188292 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12366268938 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055188312002 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674402567691 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12366268938 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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